Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Proposition (Take 2)

Article: http://www.nytimes.com/2010/09/01/education/01teacher.html?ref=education_and_schools

Proposition: I don't think it's right for school administrators to use value-added modeling to judge teachers.


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  1. lsueokaSeptember 11, 2010 at 6:02 PM

    Hi Janelle,

    Okay, you've got a single sentence proposition. It would be a better proposition, however, if you define or explain value-added modeling in your statement, to make it clearer. For example: (and take out the "I think": School administrators should not use student test scores to judge teachers.
    Can you see that this is a clearer proposition?
    mrs s
    revision assessment: 3

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